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Just A Thought |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart 
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A small thought of you entered my mind today, As I was thinking of you, I was swept away, To the moments we talked upon hours end, Your listening ear, being a faithful friend, Thoughts are like flowers, That grow and bloom, Smell like a sweet perfume, I was just thinking of you today, SO I wanted to send this your way, To let you know how special you are to me, Across these miles that seem like eternity, Your my friend, and a friend you'll always be, To me! |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
RH- This was perfection! You and your friend are very lucky to share such a special friendship. And miles really can't seperate two hearts that care! Take care, amy  ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"Thoughts are like flowers that grow and bloom". Very nice Romantic. It is interesting how some people you meet come to your thoughts again and again...my friend Lena comes into my thoughts like that...and when we are together she is just as lovely as my thoughts when we are apart. James |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
~ Bravo ~ I truly enjoyed this sweet read |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RomanticHeart~ Moments of friendship - opening and closing like the petals of the flower ... endearing thoughts. I like. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
RH, This is wonderful, my friend. So touching and heartfelt....you are very special and this person is very lucky to have you for a friend. Beautiful!!! LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful thoughts, RH! This would work well on a greeting card, I think! Very nice! Denise |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Thanks everyone! Denise funny you should say that, I was thinking of starting my own greeting card line...doing the art and the poetry...I guess this is confirmation! |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
RH, I agree with Denise....This would be a great greeting card message. All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Jeff..thank you...I wrote it about a friend far away...I left a reply to your song writing poem..I added some lines so I didn't know if it helped or not!  |
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lorilockheart Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 206Alabama |
I love "As I was thinking of you I was swept away." I agree too - great greeting card. And great feeling. I enjoyed it! Lori |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"Thoughts are like flowers, that grow and bloom, smell like a sweet perfume." Such a lovely poem...rich in tenderness. James |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
RH, i wanted to send this your way, to let you know, that good friends are what really matters, and that their never far from our thoughts. How special it must be to be a friend of yours! ~very nice writing~ A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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Effigy Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 486disbelief |
How tuely sweet. You did a very good job. |
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