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Devil in Disguise
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Devil in Disguise |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Devil in Disguise Twas a brisk November day When she came to him in her innocent way Possesing no doubt of his manly charms Leaving her speechless and with a broken heart Though the tears she hides inside How a beloved browneyes Dissappointed her that night Tempting to remove her physical charm Her scars shall heal Her heart shall forgive Her soul somehow cannot forget The capitivity she felt that nite as she wept Soaring free her wounds now have healed Time passes on and her life has become Filled with love and forgiveness For on that night she knows deep inside It was the devil in disguise. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
CocoBaci, ......WELCOME TO PASSIONS....... Enjoyed your first post, and keep churning out more such great stuff. We are all waiting to see more of your work... and enjoy your stay here... Regards, Sudhir< !signature--> In any moment of decision, The best thing you can do is the right thing, The next-best thing is the wrong thing, And the worst thing you can do is nothing. - Theodore Roosevelt [This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (edited 05-06-2000).] |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family! Please check you mail for a special message. This poem is very good, I look forward to reading more from you.  |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
It is a wise person indeed, who can look back, review their past heartbreaks and find forgiveness. A lovely poem CocoBaci ... /Kit |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Welcome to Passions. I enjoyed this piece and the rang with much truth. I hope to see more from you.  When you are old and grey and full of sleep, And nodding by the fire, take down this book, And slowly read, and dream of the soft look Your eyes had once, and of their shodows deep; How many loved your moments of glad grace, And loved your beauty with love false or true, But one man loved the pilgrim soul in you, And loved the sorrows of your changing face... William Butler Yeats |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
CocoBaci~ This is clearly lovely poetry from a heart that has known both the love and the sorrow ... and yet continues to long for another love to come. Welcome to our family of Passionate poets. Hope to see more of your tender thoughts. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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lorilockheart Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 206Alabama |
CocoBaci, Thanks for welcoming me to Passions. This poem really made me think about innocence. Even mine. Very insightful. I look forward to your others. Thanks, Lori |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Welcome to Passions, Coco! Beautiful poem full of wise insights netswan |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
That was a lovely piece. Welcome to passions! "Even a fool knows you can't touch the stars, but it doesn't stop a wise man from trying." Harry Anderson, "Night Court" *Cassandra Roseen* |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Welcome to Passions, CocoBaci! This is a wonderful poem! I enjoyed this very much! Denise |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Hi Coco and add my welcome to the list... this is very well written and expressed. like the style you wrote this in. very lovely...look forward to more. take care, jm It's amazing How you make your face just like a wall How you take your heart and turn it off How I turn my head and you lose it all ... And it's unnerving How one move just puts me by myself There you go just trusting someone else Now I know I put us both through hell ... I'm not sayin That there was nothing wrong I just didn't think you'd ever get tired of me And I'm not sayin We ever had the right to hold on I just didn't wanna let you get away from me. ~MB20~Leave |
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