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Tia Junior Member
since 2000-05-05
Posts 41massachusetts |
red.... the blood dripping down your fingertips, towards the floor. what am i thinking? what did i do this for? my thoughts over power my body... a sudden thought of death a few more actions... there's my last breath. i regret things too much i should think before i do never let your thoughts get the best of you.... |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Interesting... Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau" |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Mmmmm interesting I have to agree, sure hope this is not of someone who has or is slitting their wrist  is everything okay??Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Intriguing is correct... I hope this is not your current mental state. If so, drop the suicidal tendencies, and embrace, life and fun. Harsh things do happen, Hard times follows us, but to see the better things in life is the brave heart's legion... Take care, Regards, sudhir. In any moment of decision, The best thing you can do is the right thing, The next-best thing is the wrong thing, And the worst thing you can do is nothing. - Theodore Roosevelt |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Hi Tia -- interesting poem. yes, always best to think about things before doing them netswan |
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