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Joannak Member
since 2000-03-11
Posts 121Indiana, USA |
I look with my heart. Happiness for me, to see your green eyes, flashing. jk What better way to become immortal than to wake up each day and write? Ray Bradbury |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Short and precise. Good work!! Nathan |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Any person with green eyes will be happy today [I know I am!] Thanks, good job! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Joanna~ Yep ... this is a GOOD green-eyed beauty ! *bats green eyes* Sunshine's right .... we're just feeling mighty proud and happy ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
This is G-G-r-r-reat! Nice job...I am smiling  [This message has been edited by mariee66 (edited 04-18-2000).] |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Joanna, A provacative Haiku. There is indeed something about green eyes. I bet you cheer for Notre Dame, don't you? GO MICHIGAN! ! ! INclan |
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Compgirl Member
since 2000-02-19
Posts 85USA |
I am wishing my eyes were green..  |
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Joannak Member
since 2000-03-11
Posts 121Indiana, USA |
Thanks for responding, poets. Nate, I love the precision of haiku, thanks. Sunshine and Marge, green-eyed people are the happiest people I know, you two are so lucky! Thanks, Marie, I enjoy reading your work as well. Compgirl, I wish my eyes were green also, but I am happy with my blues. And INclan, yes, I do have IRISH eyes, and I believe ND beat Michigan recently, did they not? Thanks all, Joanna What better way to become immortal than to wake up each day and write? Ray Bradbury |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
lovely attempt again....i just remembered from my Enid Blyton's days that folks with green eyes are rumoured to be of the fairy descend... ")BTW,i have just repiled to your post in my "A Tribute to passionate poets and a cinquain challenge)pls read and comment ")  may i ask a flavour from you also?you mentioned b4 that you will like to read more of my haiku....can u possibly(if u can spare the time) reply to my post here in Open poetry#7 "S.O.S-a series of haikus for Marina's challenge) thanx in advance ") |
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