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Wet Member
since 1999-07-25
Posts 60Brentwood, Tn |
Reflection A reflection from the water, My image i see before me. A ripple causes it to break, Like my soul inside me. From the center out, Waves of madness sepperate. It causes confusion, But becomes more calm then before. I can respect the stillness alround me now, Before I couldn't, Until I jumped into the water. |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii |
this was simple and to the point, i also could relate the you image of the soul, and the respect for the calm and the wild. kindly, redheart angrybraids |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Nice poem, tilts towards a suicidal tendency, though, which is not a very honourable way to end.... Simple but effective, check out a few spelling errors though! Keep writing, Sudhir In any moment of decision, The best thing you can do is the right thing, The next-best thing is the wrong thing, And the worst thing you can do is nothing. - Theodore Roosevelt |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Wet, This is rally good here I loved the imagery, thank you for sharing. Cerenity |
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