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Open Poetry #7
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rene
Member
since 2000-04-24
Posts 113
0 posted 2000-05-04 10:20 PM

i wasn't aware
i'd shoot this far
when you shot
my star

didn't see
the fallen line
when i stepped
out of my time

wish i could
have stood the test
not crashed and burned
like all the rest
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netswan
Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369
Washington
1 posted 2000-05-04 10:23 PM

Clever poem


netswan
rene
Member
since 2000-04-24
Posts 113
2 posted 2000-05-04 10:29 PM

ta.
Danny Holloway
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since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK
3 posted 2000-05-05 12:12 PM

this was different!~~~don't understand the title though.
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