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Wrapped in Rhapsody
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Wrapped in Rhapsody |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Wrapped in Rhapsody Twilight beckons, stage is set Whispers of music, by night Silence hushed, the perfect duet With intro, my heart takes flight Two in romantic, radiant rhythm Ballad, most beautiful song Played in double time, too numb Blissful embrace, never too long Hold fast till final Fermata Last echo of piano’s key Moonlight beams, of our private Sonata Wrapped in tranquil rhapsody Marina May 2000 |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Marina, this is beautiful. One of my favorite piano pieces is Moonlight Sonata. This reminded me of that!  |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Marina, this is wonderful. . . Music and passion. . . all in one. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
ooh girl... this tickles the ole ivories divinely... very sweet tune here, my marina dear. beautiful word choices in this piece. perfection from your poets pen. take care, jm |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Marina, You are definitely growing in your work. This is one of your best m'friend. All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Marina, my dear, This poem plays abeautiful tune inside my heart. Hold fast till final Fermata Last echo of piano’s key Moonlight beams, of our private Sonata Wrapped in tranquil rhapsody You really have a way with weaving a musical masterpiece out of your words! Love Ya~  ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Marina, Lovely blend of music, poetry, romance, kindled by a dance... Loved this one... Regards, sudhir In any moment of decision, The best thing you can do is the right thing, The next-best thing is the wrong thing, And the worst thing you can do is nothing. - Theodore Roosevelt |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Denise, thanks I'm glad you liked it.Now I have probably put that tune in your head for days and come Monday you will be ready to kill me. Sven, what would passion be without a little music and moonbeams. Thank you Jm, such a wonderful compliment from one who's pen has a flow of it's own. Thank you. Jeffery, thank you, I very much appreciate your compliment and your encouragement of my work. Of course I know you are only saying it because you want me to take you Honky Tonkin! Terry, your post was lovely. I glad you liked it, thank you. Sudhir, thank you. I guess I should have added candles to make it complete. Marina |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sounds like a lovely evening...I also love Beethoven's Moonlight Sonata...especially the softness of Adagio sostenuto and the intensity of Presto agitato James |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very very beautiful, Marina! Denise |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
James, sure! To whatever you just said and thanks. Denise, thank you as always. Marina |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
Beautiful! |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Rob, thank you. That is a wonderful compliment coming from a poet such as yourself. Marina |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Marina, very different style for you, you don't usually play the romantic edge, but very nice. Parker |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
James, yes this is very different for me. Just trying to add some versatility to my writing. Marina |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Marina-- Loved this, I did!! This was stunninly beautiful and captivated my attention from first to last word. music and poetry..two of the things i can't live without..no wonder i loved it so much lol. awesome work hon... Amy ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Sounds like the music of love....and yes, that crescendo, played so well. ~~nice writing marina~~ |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Amy, thank you as always. You always have such sweet compliments for me. Danny, where have you been??? I haven't heard from you in ages. Well sir, thank you very much and don't be a stranger. Marina |
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