Open Poetry #7 |
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~Sanctuary Found In Me~...TY added :) |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
~Sanctuary Found In Me~ < !signature-->When your world becomes cruel and angry, when your skies turn dark and gray ... Always remember I'll be your shelter, always know in me ... you have a kind place to stay. Should your load become too heavy, and you're troubled by the voices in your head ... you need not retreat inside those walls, gently lay your tired mind in my healing hands instead. Find sanctuary ... in my open arms, when it all gets too hard ... when it all becomes too much ... Take my hand and come with me, find safe refuge in my tender, caressing, touch. My lips to offer quiet comfort, let my mouth be your remedy ... Soft kisses to close your eyes, whispered desires to keep you company. Let my shoulders take the burdens, I'll carry the weight so that you might rest ... Lay your weary body down next to mine, I'll hold you while you sleep, your head on my forgiving breast. With in me ... may you finally breathe, while my body rocks you with a sensual lullaby ... As you lift up to peaceful pleasures, the only sound made ... will be our contented sighs. Janet Marie ~as always, Take Care,JM~ -------------- I know it's been a long road To get these towns behind me and I Will gladly reap what we may sow-- I am there for you ... and you're there for me ... Are you waiting for Heart in hand Woman and man See me where I stand I am Heart Heart in hand ~vertical horizon~ [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (edited 05-05-2000).] |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Absolutely Beautiful JM I am on my way over now. LOL Hugs from netswan |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
![]() "Find sanctuary ... in my open arms" first tender and then steamy ![]() ![]() ![]() Hold me for yesterday Kiss me for tomorrow But love me for today. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
This is so sweet, JM!!! I am ready to come over too. What expression comes pouring out of the screen wiht these words. Absolutely wonderful!!! ![]() Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Wow. Very soft and sensuous, Janet Marie. You are growing as a poet. Corinne |
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David2 Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 407 |
Wonderfuly heartfelt Janet. Very well done. David2 ![]() |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Jm, your pen had the gift of flow and elegance. So beautifully put and tender. Marina |
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WhiteNite Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 241Montgomery, AL |
"Don't let your character get camoflaged with your environment. Find who you are and let it stay in its true colors." --Rachel Joy Scott |
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Tuck Junior Member
since 2000-04-29
Posts 27 |
this is amazing! makes me want to wait for a rainy day and curl up in the haven offered ![]() |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JanetMarie~ Enjoyed the idea of this loving poetry. Nicely done, hon. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Jeffrey Carter![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
My lips to offer quiet comfort, let my mouth be your remedy ... Soft kisses to close your eyes, whispered desires to keep you company. With in me ... may you finally breathe, while my body rocks you with a sensual lullaby ... As you lift up to peaceful pleasures, the only sound made ... will be our contented sighs ************************* Jan, OMG....you totally captivated me with this one. Such beauty can only be written from the heart. I think this is you at your best. All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Janet Marie, Very sensual and heartfelt, my dear! I love the feeling I get from this one -- it is very touching to me. I am left breathless, in amazed appreciation of your gift for writing from the heart! Love Ya!~ ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Janet...I'm sure that many a man in here would love to be in those arms, near those "forgiving" breasts..... ![]() ![]() |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Janet, pFF is so right about a man wanting to have those loving arms, the santuary of your embrace. This is so well written~~~I believe it is a self portrait of yourself. Wonderful writing from that very talented pen of yours. A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Janet Marie, What can I say, this is truly brilliant! Thanks for sharing this one, I enjoyed reading the piece. Regards, Sudhir In any moment of decision, The best thing you can do is the right thing, The next-best thing is the wrong thing, And the worst thing you can do is nothing. - Theodore Roosevelt |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Swan... come on over, we can have girl talk. ![]() thank you much! Butterfly ... your stlye-- makes me smile... thank you ALWAYS for the encouragement and the AWH. LW ...thank you much for the "sweet- wonderful". ![]() Corinne... your wow...wows me...I was trying for sensuous...and a compliment from your talented pen graces me.TY D2 ... Im glad I could touch you, I owed you. ![]() Marina-girl...I borrowed one of your pens... *smile* TY. Dave-gator... I missed you too...dont cha leave me no more. ![]() Tuck, thank you for the amazing!!curl at your pleasure ![]() Margie-girl... So glad you enjoyed, thanx for the sweet read. Jeff... *SMILE*...thank you much for the OMG...and the heartfelt reply...Im pleased I can captivate someone..TY for your enthusiasim. Terry... Im very touched by your sweet reply, breathless and amazed...these kinds of replies are so encouraging.TY GEN-girlie-girl...SOMEBODY HAD to say it LOL should be you!!TY, you know your read means a lot to me...nuzzel away... no one will know ![]() Danny-boy...my sweet BEH...thank you for seeing the things in me I cant always... you are a good friend.*kiss kiss* Sudhir... thank you for such a kind reply... briliant was more than I could hope for *smile* Im pleased you enjoyed. THANK YOU ALL. LOVE YA, JM |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
JM, this one gets a rocket ride back to the top...hang on tight! |
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I NEED SANCTUARY!!!! Wow! What a wonderful poem and fantastic invitation!....and I can tell you are just like that, JM, open, warm and caring. Anyone blessed with your friendship has a wonderful friend indeed. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Jan: Sorry i am late to join this party. that is me though..always fashionably late lol. Anyway wanted to comment on this! This was wow...just awesome. Sensual, tender, romantic, brilliant...you are at your finest with this one, my friend. And as always your emotions and feeligs come shining thru your work. Your #1 fan, Amy-girl ![]() ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Danny... your gonna spoil me...TY my BEH ![]() Balladeer...your always so sweet to me... thank you for such kind words...I hope I can live up to such compliments... and LOL at your LOUD REPLY!!!! sanctuary is open 24-7 LOL Amy-girl..your gonna spoil me too...people are gonna think Im paying you and Danny..LOL (the check is in the mail) ![]() thank you for always encouraging me. love ya too THANKS ALL. JM |
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