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Open Poetry #7

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msstt
Junior Member

since 2000-05-03

Posts 23
Huntington,Ind

0 posted 2000-05-04 10:15 AM

If there was a time.
I could ask you to be mine.
It would be now.
Cause I know how.
I would hold you close.
And not ever let you loose.
High above the world.
You would find.
You are the only one on my mind.
And if time would reveal,
You will know that my love is real.

Tricia

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 2000-05-04 10:59 AM

Sure sounds like love to me!

Denise

Temptress

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

2 posted 2000-05-05 03:30 PM

Sweet.

Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau"

Cerenity
Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

3 posted 2000-05-06 05:42 PM

Hi msstt,

This is lovely my friend, true love is it not just so sweet. And I have not told you welcome to passions so welcome, wonderful to have you here.

Cerenity

CocoBaci
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

4 posted 2000-05-06 05:54 PM

So few words yet with so many feelings,
This is indeed a sweet reading to me!
Looking forward to seeing more ..
CocoBaci

[This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 05-06-2000).]

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