Open Poetry #7 |
Soulmate |
Brandyn Sand Member
since 2000-04-21
Posts 82Columbia, SC |
I created you Out of the depths of my soul, The desires of my heart, Where you waited in painful silence Since the dawn of my awakening. I did not know you "were" Until I became you. All that you are: Strength, honor, loyalty, and truth, I allowed to flourish within me, Perhaps to prove to myself You could really exist Outside the boundaries of my mind - A perfect manifestation Conceived of by an imperfect soul, Devoid only of love, The one emotion I could not grant you For I had never known it myself Before you were born. And now I feel it so profoundly, Guard over it ever carefully, So that when our paths unite I can present this love to you, Pure and unblemished, Making you complete. And it will be in that moment That you will know. . . Your love was always safest In my hands. © Brandyn Sand 10/98 |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Brandyn* I was completely moved by this, your words are like soft breezes on a warm summer day, showing how love brings out the best and more often than not brings out things we never knew exsisted within us at all. Beautifully done, thank you so much for sharing this. Hold me for yesterday Kiss me for tomorrow But love me for today. |
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msstt Junior Member
since 2000-05-03
Posts 23Huntington,Ind |
This was great.It was very moving.And made me have lots of thoughts of the new man of my life.Tricia |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Absolutely beautiful, Brandyn! Very well written! Denise |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Very, very lovely. Corinne |
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warmhrt Senior Member
since 1999-12-18
Posts 1563 |
Beautifully written, eloquently said. So true, also...we cannot make love appear...it has to find us, and we have to tend to it carefully. You said it in such a sweet and tender manner, one that only those who truly know love could say it. Very nice work, Brandyn. Kris the poet's pen...gives to airy nothing A local habitation and a name ~ Shakespeare |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
~Brandyn~ A beautifully written piece! "I created you out of the depths of my soul, the desires of my heart" "And it will be in that moment that you will know... your love was always safest in my hands." Such beautiful and breathtaking lines! You have a unique talent! Thanks for sharing this! Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Would that we could fashion our soulmate like this...I am waiting still for mine.. beautiful poem! And I visited your website..it's lovely! You've done a great job with it! |
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