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Reflections on a dream and my awakening
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Reflections on a dream and my awakening |
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rojogrande Junior Member
since 2000-04-10
Posts 29Fullerton, CA, USA |
monster grabbing stealing claws teeth blood ripping jaws why???? why???? pulling sweating saliva dripping he pulls i scream he reaches he reaches he reaches ...i escape was he there? was there nothing? i see him he sees me i run he chases he reaches he reaches he reaches HE REACHES!!!!! ............. ............. ............. ............. i awake cold sweat tears fear of the unreal why???? why???? (This is the best recollection of my dream.) |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Sounds like a nightmare to me, great intensity in this one.  |
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brandondinsmore Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 142OKC, OK |
Great summary. Could use something more, I think; but still a great work. Keep at this one! |
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