Open Poetry #7 |
What is love? |
PericolosoAmore Junior Member
since 2000-04-14
Posts 31 |
What is love, What ever it is, It has taken me over, What ever I see, It gives me the shiver, It reminds me of you, Everything. In song, In picture, In television, And I see you, Everywhere, Everybody is you, Every couple that I see, Is you and me, Together. So now I know what love is, It has confused me, Time and time again, What it is has made me think, Now, And then, And all the time, I can not feel it, I hust know, Thinking of you always, I have come to the conclusion, That I'm in love with you. By PericolosoAmore. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Welcome to Passions! I'm not sure if I have a definition of Love either...but you have all the symptoms Thank you for sharing this. Hold me for yesterday Kiss me for tomorrow But love me for today. |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
What is this thing we call love that takes over our mind, bodies and souls? It's a great feeling to fall in love.... Isn't it? Welcome to Passions ~Sheri |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family! Please check your email for a special welcome....I look forward to reading more of your work... |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Welcome to passion's. I think you will see that we are like one big family here. All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Welcome to Passions Pericoloso! Ah, the mystery of love. Great Poem. Sounds like you are describing the undescribable very well. netswan |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Hi and Welecome to Passions. Isn't Love Grand Nice read. Thanks for sharing |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Ah to love or not to love, that is the question? your deeply in love with this person, I think you should let them know! enjoyed your poem! WELCOME!!! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Peri~ Welcome to Passion's. Enjoyed the read. Seems you've plopped yourself down in the middle of a meadow of love. Nice place to be. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi PericolosoAmore, Well you sound deep in love thats wonderful, I wish you the best. WELCOME TO PASSIONS, Cerenity |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
That's an interesting screen name...DangerousLove (translated) Most cool... Nice entrance "Dangerous One" |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
I have said it once, I'll say it again, I like this poem very much and you have a lot of lovin to give, so express some of it in your poetry and you can't lose . Can't wait for your next poem . L.of.L. Tom . With poetry as your weapon - express your iner feelings so all may carry your sorrow, united as one . |
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PericolosoAmore Junior Member
since 2000-04-14
Posts 31 |
Thanx everyone. I feel quite good about this first poem. I shall be putting some more on very soon. Thanx again. P. A. |
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Enola Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 138England |
What do you mean, it sucks? It's great! Even though I'm not in the same sitation as you, I still get what you mean & that's one of the things that makes it great. "In song," In Slipknot?!?! Tee-hee!!! Love& Hugs Debs. The tragedy of it is that nobody sees the look of desperation on my face. Thousands and thousands of us, and we're passing one another without a look of recognition. |
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