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Alone Again. . . |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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This one is an oldie. . . I wrote it 14 years ago, when I was 17. . . Alone again, my thoughts only of you You seem so close, yet you are so far Alone again, my thoughts only of you How I wish I was where you are Alone again, my thoughts only of you Saying "Good-bye" was the hardest thing I had to do Now, I really am alone again, But I wonder if you are too Alone again, my thoughts only of you How I long to see you again Alone again, my thoughts only of you But when I do see you again, I'll only say these three words, "I love you" --------------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
This is a perfect example of your sweetness hun...even at such a young age!!!  HUGS!!!Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
AHHHH Sven only 17 and already the romantic heart and soul is evident... proof a gentleman is born... not taught. great writing early on..as poets are also born not taught. later sven-gator jm |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
ABSOLUSTLY---WHAT THEY JUST SAID... Sweetheart--sweet heart, age is of the soul... thanx again....LTY,,, |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
They said it all!! This is wonderful! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Romantic to the inner most depth of your fun-filled 17 year old heart. Nice work, Sven, really liked reading, got me mesmerised and set me thinking... regards, sudhir Take each day as it comes, Consider each day as a flight, Try hard to succeed and fly, Surely then you will reach some height. But if by some chance you don’t, Remember that tomorrow will always come. Learn this well and learn this hard That today’s efforts will pay for tomorrow’s fun. A Crazy Monster, a.k.a Ski |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
A very romantic and loving poem Sven! Nathan |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you all. . . proof positive that I have always been this way!! Thanks again. . . ------------------------------------------------------------< !signature--> That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl [This message has been edited by Sven (edited 05-03-2000).] |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
So consumed by thoughts of the one you love. Yearning for her to let you love her! This carried a sense of sadness and hope all wrapped up in one! Even at 17...a hopeless romantic! |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
14 years later and it can still make the ladies swoon. Quit obviously just the begining to your romantic writings. Where were you when I was seventeen? ( last year, agian.) Marina |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
So lovely, Sven. Corinne |
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