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I Am (Challenge) Late As Usual |
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania 
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I am about as confusing as this poem so here goes.. I am confused yet I must always stay strong I wonder if I will last that long... I hear voices telling me that I am wrong I want to know what it feels like to belong I am confused yet I must always stay strong I pretend to soar up into the sky I feel that my life is still passing me by I touch a cloud, and begin to cry I worry that eventually my soul will die I cry that soon I must say goodbye I am confused yet I must always stay strong I understand my life has truly just begun I say everyone should have a chance to have fun I dream that all the hate will just be done I try my very best to please everyone I hope that I have disappointed none I am confused yet I must always stay strong ~Susie |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Well Hello Susie! So glad to know you. This is wonderfully written -- and I am very sure you belong here right at PASSIONS hugs from netswan |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
Naw, Susie...just think of it as being Fashionably Late.  And this response just rocks....full of sensitivity and creativity and other words that end in ivity.  Yeah, I know...I'm a silly...*grins*...well, probably all ready know that from my response to the challenge..... Wonderfully written, and I'm very glad to know you a bit more. See ya around the Forums. Alicat, the Persnikitty |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I don't think that you can ever be too late Susie!! LOL This was a great poem. . . and I don't feel that you're that complex!! --------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
You belong right here at Passions, that's where!!! You sure don't disappoint us here either! I like this poem, very heartfelt. Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania |
netswan~ Thanks so much . I'm so glad you liked it. I think I belong here too.returns hugs Alicat~ Then I am always making a bold fashion statement . This was a great challenge, by the way, thanks for reinstating it. I love getting to know more about my family. Do you know what else I love? "Ivity" Words . Thanks again. See ya around.Sven~ It just took awhile to write, that's all . Thanks, I'm so glad I'm not THAT complex  .Lizzie~ Thanks, that really means a lot. I feel like I belong here too . Glad you liked it.Thanks again everyone. ~Susie |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
-Susie This was great hon! And don't worry about being late...I dont think anyone of us here at Passions has a time clock lol. As for being complex..you are no more complex than me lol...and you made a lot of sense to me. this was a great post!! take care, Amy ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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