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laryalee2
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0 posted 2002-07-14 11:15 PM




The daisies formed a pillow for
their days of feathered innocence;
they twirled in love and never felt
the winds of dark, approaching storms.

Two hearts beguiled by distant lights
succumbed to other, pliant arms;
the daisies wilted in the field
and years were crusted by regrets.

But now, the meadow blends its grace
in waves of silver-rippled green;
for daisy dreams came back to dance,
and love has twirled them 'round again.

© Copyright 2002 Laryalee Fraser - All Rights Reserved
Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2002-07-15 02:25 AM


Your daisys and love entwine to make a beautiful poem.  Joyce
pegasus111
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2 posted 2002-07-15 10:12 AM


ahhh..wildflowers..you know how I love to talk about them!  This is a lovely write. Love and flowers seem to be inseperable don't they?  

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



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3 posted 2002-07-15 01:48 PM


Lary:  This is really beautiful and I enjoyed it very much.

Betty Lou Hebert

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4 posted 2002-07-18 09:52 PM



Amber eyes open~
Daisies waltz with a soft breeze
In three quarter time.

BloomingRose
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5 posted 2002-07-20 02:22 PM


Lovely poem!

Deb

laryalee2
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6 posted 2002-07-25 11:50 PM


Joyce, thank you!

Pegasus, yes -- they belong together!

Thanks, Betty Lou!

Enchantress, that's truly lovely!

Thanks, Deb!


Lary

Marge Tindal
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Merry Christmas dear sweet friend~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email -       noles1@totcon.com       

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