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Curtain Call - Haiku

ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10

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King of Prussia, PA USA

0 posted 2002-06-12 07:37 AM

Deepest of Springs Morn
doth close her curtains lushness
Summers Waltz begins

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

[This message has been edited by ellie LeJeune (06-12-2002 07:37 AM).]

BSC

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since 2000-02-04

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New York, USA

1 posted 2002-06-12 08:03 AM

Ahhhh Ellie ~ And I can hear the gentle music playing in the background...such a refreshing little gem... Bonnie

wordancer
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since 2000-07-30

Posts 809
VA

2 posted 2002-06-12 10:03 AM

sweet words indeed...let the riotous dance of summer begin

Anonymity
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since 2002-06-11

Posts 45

3 posted 2002-06-12 10:53 AM

There was a time when I was descent with a waltz looks like I'll need to brush up a tad. Great Haiku. Thank you.

laryalee2
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since 2002-05-22

Posts 96
British Columbia, Canada

4 posted 2002-06-12 07:33 PM

Perfectly designed, Ellie...a sigh....

Lary

Trillium

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since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

5 posted 2002-06-13 05:56 PM

ellie: Beautiful! We haven't had any spring yet though! Suppose it will be instant summer when it quite raining.

Betty Lou Hebert

pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27

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ocala, fl, usa

6 posted 2002-06-13 06:39 PM

we went right from fall into summer in Florida this year. I really missed the spring. this is lovely Ellie ( as usual ) The image is delightful.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

Joyce Johnson

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since 2001-03-10

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Washington State

7 posted 2002-06-14 04:23 PM

Of course this lovely Ellie. They always are. I was gone for several days inside a lovely hotel where outside weather had no meaning. I understand we had our first truly summer day yesterday and I missed it. Joyce

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