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CowgirlFreedom17 Member
since 2002-05-20
Posts 82Mississippi 
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Time is like an ocean Bursting with emotion Leaving pleasant memories Full of hidden mysteries Time will keep on going The ocean will keep blowing Neither will go back The way they came before. Don't hold back the words you really mean. |
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laryalee2 Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 96British Columbia, Canada |
Lovely phrases and a dynamic conclusion! Lary |
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Trillium 
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
I like your poem. Time and oceans both seem to go on forever. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Yes time doesn't go back, but I never thought that way about the ocean until your poem Very good and welcome here. Joyce |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
welcome to our corner. a good beginning here...looking for more...  the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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wordancer Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809VA |
Short and sweet...nice. IHOPoets, bringing poetic scribes together-- |
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