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mistyrose Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 75state of anxiety |
kiss me softly in the morning sunlight-and hold me close for the rest of the day say softly "i love you" in a poem written in sand being washed away by the tide.... |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MistyRose~ How lovely are your thoughts. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Trillium![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Even if the tide washes the words away, your heart will remember. Betty Lou Hebert |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
ooooo, so romantically delicious! Ellie A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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jamesjiao Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 268Backwaters of Avalon |
Yes, constructive critiques.. You know, how I really love the sea, misty, I go there sometimes by myself, reading every tide that splashes against the rocks.... it's a short, but really beautiful poem of yours. I shall give it a 10. - James |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
That's sweet. A poem written just for two. Melton |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very lovely! So romantic! |
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Red_Feather Member
since 2001-01-19
Posts 131The Vagabond Sea |
This paints a very warm picture for me. I love the closeness you are able to express. Another of your heartfelt works for my library. One's not half two it's two are halves of one EE Cummings |
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Red_Feather Member
since 2001-01-19
Posts 131The Vagabond Sea |
Ooops, i forgot to add this the first time. One's not half two it's two are halves of one EE Cummings |
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RebeccaJoy Junior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 35 |
Very gentle and heartfelt. |
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mistyrose Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 75state of anxiety |
thanks so much to all of you for your very kind comments.....they do mean very much to me...thanks for reading...and replying you have made my day! mistyrose~* |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I love reading and thinking about the seashore! Kathleen Blake |
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FoxXena Member
since 2001-06-13
Posts 141where dragons play, children run free and foxes are never hunted |
You know...love and the seashore are often put together (not that I'm saying that its overused). The way you used it is simply wonderful. ![]() Would you be known by everybody? Then you know nobody. |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
I love those beautiful moments spent with the one you love. The beach is such a calming place....perfect for snuggling! ![]() |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
This is lovely mistyrose ![]() Maree |
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