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Fade To Oblivion

pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27

Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa

0 posted 2001-05-26 08:56 PM

Dark hooded eyes that burn into my brain,
a message clear and painful to my heart,
finished they say, ended now as it began,
with a sudden fury that engulfs the flesh,
a searing pain so excruciating, my breath
leaves my body with an anguished sob of protest,
the chill in your stare thickens my tongue,
seizing me with an unbearable thirst,
arms tense at my side, fingers ache to touch,
to reach out and hold that which they need,
that which was once so familiar, so sure,
now an angry force alien to my senses,
a thunderstorm, sudden, all consuming,
washes away my hope, drowns my soul,
because I love you more than my life,
and my love now stands pitifully alone.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2001-05-26 11:57 PM

Pegasus~
So vividly sad ...
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

2 posted 2001-05-28 05:45 PM

Very sad and very well expressed, Pegasus.

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

3 posted 2001-05-28 10:26 PM

So very sad. Well expressed. Joyce

Red_Feather
Member

since 2001-01-19

Posts 131
The Vagabond Sea

4 posted 2001-05-29 10:15 PM

That which was so familiar, so sure
now an angry force alien to my senses

I loved this description...I have reeled like that, and you put it well.

One's not half two it's two are halves of one EE Cummings

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

5 posted 2001-05-30 09:43 PM

I hurt after reading this!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

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