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Green, Yellow, White Haiku |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. 
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Grass, emerald green Picture perfect lawn today Tommorrow yellow Dandelions march Across lawn, uninvited Golden heads salute Few days, gold is gone White haired soldier waits on breeze Promise of new gold Dandelion bouquet anyone? Dennis :^) |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
ah, you have written about nature, I love nature... Kathleen Blake |
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Dopey Dope
Moderator
Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Beautiful job here. I enjoyed this just like I enjoy all your other pieces.  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dennis~ I'd sure be lion In a dandi of a roar Without my mane man ! *SEE ... you ALWAYS do this to me !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
The battle with the dandelions is a yearly event. I haven't won one yet! Betty Lou Hebert |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
You have a meadow dandi one that roars hello waves with white fluff Paws great Haiku..I love the way you magically put this together! Ellie (no bouquet for me, yellow isn't my color!) A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Many more to come Floating gently in the breeze Seeking battlegrounds Melton |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Of course, I loved these haikus, Dennis! Awesome work  Take care, Melissa~ |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Grass, emerald green Picture perfect lawn today Tommorrow yellow first thing I thought when I read the title of the poem was about the irish flag, ok it is orange instead of yellow and it is not in the right order...then you mentioned emerald well I just ranting read Loved the read. "you are what you own in this land, you can be king and it all depends on the view and what you can see" Whipping boy |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Well done. I know the battle of the dandelions all too well. Joyce |
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