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wordancer Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809VA 
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at mercy beach i stand contemplative a far stare into distant waves serenity beckons let go let go as slow tide engulfs the shore of pebbles worn smooth in time a lone gull calls— curvature of wing defines this longing flash of white grace in my pocket i clutch three smooth stones tokens of water, sand, time touchstones of absolution from mercy beach IHOPoets, bringing poetic scribes together from all corners of the globe. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
More questions then answers here.But peaceful. Joyce |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
you have nothing to be repentive about. your words are a beacon for the rest of us.  the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautifully done! Very nice! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
WordDancer~ This is stunninly beautiful ... 'a lone gull calls— curvature of wing defines this longing flash of white grace in my pocket i clutch three smooth stones tokens of water, sand, time touchstones of absolution' What a lovely *gifting* you've shared~ Thank you for being a poet~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Beautiful and very peaceful. The imagery is outstanding. Deb |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
wordancer: This is lovely! I enjoy the ocean and beach so much and your poem took me there. I always have beach rocks in my pocket too! Betty Lou Hebert |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
"touchstones of absolution" If only our "human condition" could wear as smooth with time, as these abraded stones. Thanks. Dances With Words. |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
at mercy beach i stand contemplative a far stare into distant waves serenity beckons Quite a pondering scene you've pictured. I hope you find the answers you seek. Melton |
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wordancer Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809VA |
Thanks for all your kind replies...they mean so much to me. |
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