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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... 
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a memory unique Soft, mid-spring breeze kisses the dew glimmering like a teardrop upon her cheek finest jewel in all the realms, nay universe. Silk and lace rustle in promised competition dewdrop on edge of most beautiful petal the taste is of eternity, eternal life, youth. Morning light stealing with his wispy shadow canopy twinkles as thread captures rainbows another rustle, as beauty softly awakens. The smile that ignited one thousand poems enriched florists, jewelers, apothecaries the very smile that heaven must wear. Unspoken promise fills, warms the chamber beauty awakens in the arms of her admirer the world is perfect if only for that moment. His question vulnerable upon bended knee her answer slides upon her beloved finger sealed with nary a word, just precious lips. Beauty has gifted; the story shall live safely snuggled in velvet box, some say antique a proposal that transcends, a memory unique. ~~~~~~~~  |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Oh my... this is tenderly romantic, and is a jewel indeed to read! I like this very much. Deb |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Romantically well done. Joyce |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Daniel~ WONDERFULLY tender~ 'Silk and lace rustle in promised competition' Ooooooooh .... LOVE that line of thought~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
His question vulnerable upon bended knee her answer slides upon her beloved finger sealed with nary a word, just precious lips I like it Melton |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Soooooo sweet and romantic, Daniel! |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Tramp Poet: Beautifully done! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... |
thanks to y'all for the input! |
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