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Peeling Potatoes

aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

0 posted 2002-03-13 11:12 PM

When you first admitted to my sight,
I did not take notes of anything but brown
little spots on your face.

As I wash your skin, I wonder
what a good dish you may be,
as muds slowly slide away.

Now I get a better view of your visage,
I gently peel off your skin.
Slightly press against your softly texture,
Now I know your heart.

Now I taste a bite of my soup,
what a wonderful dish I've made!
How beautiful is your love, your heart
that I'll always remember!

//Well what do you think of this?

Eliza Simmons
~Flower lasts so an hour, yet spring will brings her back to life again.

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

1 posted 2002-03-14 01:02 AM

I think its adorable and delicious soup. Joyce

Solstice Son
Member

since 2000-09-19

Posts 469

2 posted 2002-03-14 12:39 PM

HAH!! BRILLIANT!!!! A beuatiful piece...one after my own heart..heh heh all puns intended...KUDOS!!!

Sol

" and I dream of her always,
even when I don't dream.
her name's on my tongue
and her blood's in my stream."

'Christmas in Prison' John Prine

Mother_Earth
Senior Member

since 2000-11-20

Posts 1370
1/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan

3 posted 2002-03-14 04:08 PM

aries this is great! Now I will forever look at that spud in a different way. Lovely, ME

aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

4 posted 2002-03-14 05:22 PM

hehe. this is a happy one, I've one that is sad. It's about weed. If you've time, go check out dark poetry forum.

Once I hated cooking,
then one day I tried to peel a potato,
and I discovered a world beyond my tongue.
A little cup of tea, (Remember I write something about that)
a little tomato,
a little of something
open our heart with love.

hehe. Huming Allulia... Grace from above, glory your name. Amen!

Eliza Simmons
~Flower lasts so an hour, yet spring will brings her back to life again.

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