Corner Pub #2 |
a hope of reunion |
Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... |
Reunion Famous man cries out for dearly departed son. Seeking someday reunion love lost pierces him. Mournfull song pouring underlaid with hope. Longing hidden in grief grasps for understanding. Tears of promise mixed with trembles of loss. Falling into his music father sings for lost son. Broken heart offered one last, sad goodbye. Leaving his son in heaven a love immortalized. The living goes on and on stacking days, counting nights. Sometimes; soul slashing sorrow, reunion... a lifetime goal. Dedicated to Eric Clapton with sympathy. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
I can relate, oh how I can relate. Joyce |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
So sad and so true to life! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
So touching, Daniel, so very touching. |
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wordancer Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809VA |
Very nice indeed, especially like this line. Tears of promise mixed with trembles of loss. Vivid emotions here. |
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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... |
really appreciate the replies! thank y'all, Daniel ... was once upon, bleeding |
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