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ellie LeJeune
Member Elite

since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

0 posted 2002-02-12 08:46 PM

Does the sea kiss the shore,
as gently?
Do storms rage at sea,
with this passion?

When did the sun rise
to kiss the dew,
or set upon a crimson sky,
that is kissed by a twilight moon,
ever know a true loves kiss?

When a velvet midnight sky
kisses the stars awake,
or lightning flash and thunder roar,
upon a summers midday sweet,
can all of these ever say
they know
my lovers kiss transcends
all mystery and joy,
that mortal man may know?

A kiss
beyond the years of time.
Eternal promised dawn
of velvet skies
and stars of wonders joy.
Beyond a cosmic dream.

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

pegasus111
Member Elite

since 2000-07-27

Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa

1 posted 2002-02-12 09:15 PM

Ellie, this is beautiful. Crafted with love and poetic talent. Bravo!

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

2 posted 2002-02-13 03:42 PM

ellie: Wonderful! What a beautiful Valentine poem!

Betty Lou Hebert

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

3 posted 2002-02-13 05:12 PM

You speak the value of a loving kiss. Joyce

deleeme
Senior Member

since 1999-10-09

Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA

4 posted 2002-02-15 06:00 AM

Ah to be so blest AND so appreciative of the fact and reality of Love in your life!
I like it, Dear Ellie, especially how you did not compare your romance to other couples but to what is totally beyond the world at large in so many ways! That is a wonderful perspective, a marvelous treasrue, and a powerful expressiveness on your part to so richly convey it to us. Blessing both to you and Your Champion Kisser(Vince)!

Every Day's a Blessing
And Gift-Wrapped from Above,
Share it with another
And Spread the Father's Love!!!

May You come to Know His Best Blessing

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

5 posted 2002-02-15 09:08 AM

This poem is quite the cosmic dream, ellie.. What wonderful imagery you use... superb, m'friend..

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2002-02-20 02:53 AM

Ellie~

'When a velvet midnight sky
kisses the stars awake'

Oooooooh .... sheer beauty here~
I so enjoyed this~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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