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Corner Pub #2

flood...(tanka)

Packratmike
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since 2001-02-25

Posts 632
California, USA

0 posted 2001-05-23 12:41 PM

darkness spills slowly
spreading her murky puddles
beneath moonlit trees
drowning golden branches wave
for Luna's gleaming rescue

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2001-05-23 04:24 PM

I enjoyed this one mike. Very well done!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Packratmike
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since 2001-02-25

Posts 632
California, USA

2 posted 2001-05-23 04:33 PM

Thank you, DD....glad you enjoyed.*S*

Mike

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

3 posted 2001-05-23 06:35 PM

Nice work, Mike.
You have a talent that I crave to read.

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

4 posted 2001-05-23 08:04 PM

Very good, Mike! I enjoyed this very much!

Packratmike
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since 2001-02-25

Posts 632
California, USA

5 posted 2001-05-23 09:49 PM

Temptress...Thank you...I wish I had the time and talent to be a bit more prolific. Glad you like this one. *S*

Denise...Glad you enjoyed, thank you.*S*

Mike

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

6 posted 2001-05-23 11:16 PM

This is really lovely and moody. i like it very much.

Betty Lou Hebert

Packratmike
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since 2001-02-25

Posts 632
California, USA

7 posted 2001-05-23 11:38 PM

Thank you, Betty. Glad you liked it.*S*

Mike

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