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Trillium 
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA 
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A bard has come into our hall And when the evening meal is through, He'll tell us what he can recall Of when this land was new. We hurry through our chores so we Can gather near the fireplace. I love to see the flickering light Illuminate each face. So late into the night we stay, Enraptured by the tales he tells. Listening to his Druid's voice, That weaves it's magic spells. The fire dies, the children sleep, But still entranced, we stay, Until the rooster crows to show That night has slipped away. Then all day long our heads are filled With visions of the past. We don't know when he'll come again, So memories must last! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very good, Betty Lou! I enjoyed your little tale! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I really like this one. It makes me want to sit and listen to your bard. Thanks, from Midnitesun |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
What a lovely thing, to have a bard entertain you. Joyce |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
You weave an enchanting vision, of privileged exposure, of rich atmosphere-common, yet expectfully yearning. Your present verse speaks very highly of your own ability to grasp the attention of others and keep it. Enjoyed it much! David No Better Place do I know Than where Hearts knit as one, For in that grand experience, The Better ALL become. God Bless us All!!! [This message has been edited by deleeme (edited 05-23-2001).] |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Then all day long our heads are filled With visions of the past. We don't know when he'll come again, So memories must last! enjoyed this one alot, the last two lines ring true for a lot of circumstances. "across the unfair divide |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
lovely meter, this flowed flawlessly Kathleen Blake |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
I appreciate the messages from everyone and your nice remarks. Thanks. Betty Lou Hebert |
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