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Trillium 
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA 
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Marie Creek The creek is such a living thing, To walk beside and hear it sing, Liquid songs about it's sources. It's diversions and it's courses. All the wildlife it has nourished. Lovely flowers that have flourished All along it's verdant edges, Where the wild duck hides in sedges. It brings life to many masses, Gives it's gift and onward passes! Betty Lou Hebert Published in Rhyme Time Magazine 1991 [This message has been edited by Trillium (01-27-2002 02:41 PM).] |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
such a lovely clever piece. so well conceived. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
You bring all of nature so alive ! Exquisite!  |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
I can hear the water and wildlife in these words. A peaceful write...good job! Just believe... |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Well done again, Betty. Joyce |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Thank you everyone for reading and I appreciate the nice comments. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BettyLou~ Your thoughts are sheer liquid in motion~ This is so lovely~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
I love poems about nature, and this one is really very good! Deb |
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Soaringeagle Member
since 2000-12-06
Posts 156CANADA |
well done betty makes me want to dip my toes in marie creek |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Marge: Thanks for your nice comment. I enjoy the creek so much, I wanted to share it! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Blooming Rose: Thanks for reading and commenting on this. I too love everything about nature! I am fortunate to live in the country where I see many types of wildlife. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Don: Don't think you'd enjoy dipping your toes in Marie Creek at the moment! However in August it's pretty nice! Thanks for reading and enjoyed your comments. Betty Lou Hebert |
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