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Solstice Son
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since 2000-09-19

Posts 469

0 posted 2002-01-14 03:57 PM

I have your picture,
though I never seen you face to face.
I hear your voice,
but only when I play it back in my mind.
Your scent would be like lifesbreath
if only I could find some ' Satsuma. '
You touch me, constantly,
but only with your written words.
And I have tasted your sweetness,
if only in my dreams.
Other men would founder,
in such, torrid depridation.
But, I know well, of many things.
The least of which are Time and Space.
So I'll love you, unrequited.
For its the only kind,
that never dies.

" The question shouldn't be...'Why are we here?' but rather 'ARE we here? "

Leonard Nimoy

Mother_Earth
Senior Member

since 2000-11-20

Posts 1370
1/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan

1 posted 2002-01-14 11:42 PM

Solstice, rambling on about things in your heart, about feelings that are just under the skin. You have shared lots of the feelings with us. Thanks, ME

Dionysus' Daughter
New Member

since 2002-01-14

Posts 7

2 posted 2002-01-15 07:32 AM

Hmm. Tell you what I like or dislike?

I like... the whole thing.

I dislike... hmm. I dislike the fact that I can't be there to illustrate how much I like it. *smiles*
~DD

pegasus111
Member Elite

since 2000-07-27

Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa

3 posted 2002-01-15 09:32 AM

such an honest revelation of feelings for another..well done Sol.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

Solstice Son
Member

since 2000-09-19

Posts 469

4 posted 2002-01-15 04:25 PM

Thanks everyone...ME, DD, Peg...it was just one of those things....and too involved for more straightforward words

Sol

" The question shouldn't be...'Why are we here?' but rather 'ARE we here? "

Leonard Nimoy

wordancer
Senior Member

since 2000-07-30

Posts 809
VA

5 posted 2002-01-17 10:59 AM

Well done ramblin' indeed, really like the simple statements here.

-word

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2002-01-24 06:30 AM

A truly romantic poem...
I Must visit the Corner Pub more often...

Solstice Son
Member

since 2000-09-19

Posts 469

7 posted 2002-01-24 07:53 AM

Worddancer, Sunshine, thanks for reading my stuff..glad you enjoyed it

Sol

" and I dream of her always,
even when I don't dream.
her name's on my tongue
and her blood's in my stream."

'Christmas in Prison' John Prine

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

8 posted 2002-01-24 03:31 PM

This is very moving and romantic.

Betty Lou Hebert

amusemi
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1262
A State of Disarray

9 posted 2002-01-24 11:09 PM

Love, what a confusing, crazy thing...indeed it is invariably worthy of rambling about, for it is a puzzle with no solution. Enjoyed the poem much!

Just believe...

Solstice Son
Member

since 2000-09-19

Posts 469

10 posted 2002-01-25 07:58 AM

Trillium, thanks...it took forever...three hours here and there...stringing together thoughts..I'm just happy...that it turned out as...dedicated, as it did

amusemi~ happy to make you happy

Sol

" and I dream of her always,
even when I don't dream.
her name's on my tongue
and her blood's in my stream."

'Christmas in Prison' John Prine

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