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Trillium 
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA 
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Shattered Silence I woke within the pearly light That marked the ebbing of the night And as the sky began to show The promise of a golden glow, Bird song pierced the crystal air. Silence shattered, everywhere! Betty Lou Hebert [This message has been edited by Trillium (01-02-2002 11:51 PM).] |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Betty, how simply enchanting this is! A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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Wikket Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 340Santa Clara, CA USA |
Fantastic...I could not have described dawn as well as you... ~~Jamie "...Two roads diverged in a wood, and I--took the one less traveled by, And that has made all the difference." --Robert Frost |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
ellie: Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Jamie: Thanks for the kind words! Betty Lou Hebert |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
You make waking up so peaceful. Thanks Melton |
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DJLI Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 237TN, USA |
What a wonderful description! life is like a road: full of pot holes and dead ends. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Lovely, Betty! Very pretty! |
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Soaringeagle Member
since 2000-12-06
Posts 156CANADA |
BETTY A GREAT DESCIPTION OF THE DAWN. LOVE IT. |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Melton and DJLI: Thank you both for commenting. Glad you enjoyed the poem. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Denise: Thank you for commenting. |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Soaring Eagle: Nice to see your comments and thanks for reading. I'm glad you liked it. Betty Lou Hebert |
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RadikalGenetics New Member
since 2002-01-03
Posts 8 |
Many many a nights I have stayed awake, to come to that moment where a rainbow of colors seem to twirl forward delivering a bird filled chirping day, with crisp air and the gold pouring out, God of Honey pouring out and drowning out the strange hues of red and purple. When the realization that I had just stayed up the whole night sitting on my deck - with my silent friends all in a daize - I could do nothing less than burst out into laughter and say - Good Morning! To you, Good Morning! [This message has been edited by RadikalGenetics (01-04-2002 11:58 PM).] |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
it's trying to put the pieces back together again that seem nearly impossible. Kathleen-- |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
RadicalGenetics: Thanks for your interesting comments. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Kathleen: Thanks for reading and commenting. |
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