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Oh Hear Me |
aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
Believe me On hearing my confession Of my love For you, my sweet love, That my love not only outlasts days and years But also the wind and sea roars. Believe me When I said I’m not trifling. Of my love For you, my sweet love, Is more than just a feeling. A candle may smell nice, But I love the wax that got melt down by the fire. Believe me On receiving my ring, Which will be on your hands forever. Of my love For you, my sweet love, There is no words can describe. The moment you’re out of sight I miss you, chasing your shadow. ~Flower lasts so an hour, yet spring will brings her back to life again. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
This is precious. Joyce |
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DJLI Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 237TN, USA |
Such a wonderful way to express such emotions. Can't wait to read more. life is like a road: full of pot holes and dead ends. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
excellent, hon, just lovely I am/Kathleen/ |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
A beautiful poem of love. Good job. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Solstice Son Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 469 |
I think I enjoy your stuff...so much more...because its nothing like how I write.. Excellent! sol " The question shouldn't be...'Why are we here?' but rather 'ARE we here? " |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Eliza~ This is just so lovely, sweetie~ Happy New Year to you~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
A pure and lovely poem of love! A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
I hear ya. You’ve described true devotion to a “T”. Beautiful write. Melton |
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