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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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Two Snowflakes Two snowflakes met within a cloud In mists of winter‘s space He, a flake of icy white And she, a star of lace The cloud was heavy, winds were strong In dark mid-winter night They both held hands and tried to Stay together in the flight Then tumbling down they lost their grip He kept in sight her face He said, I’ll find you on the ground, My crystal star of lace In dawning hour the sun arose The flake looked near and far Rising with each whispering wisp To find his crystal star And there she was, lit by the sun So delicate and clear Among the millions, only one He wanted to be near Then children came outside to play To build a man of snow She said this is the end for us For I have got to go They wrapped her in a ball of snow Which then became a face She sparkled in the morning light This crystal star of lace He too was packed into the cheek And both remained for days She said what will become of us In sun’s now warming rays He said the sun will melt us both And to the ground we’ll fall But I will not forget your face, The brightest star of all I’ll follow you to nearby streams And into rivers flow I’ll follow you into the sea Wherever you may go One day we’ll rise together in In the haze of summer heat And somewhere in a cloud of white The two of us will meet The winds will send us onward To the place of winter storm You’ll form into a crystal star With frozen heart so warm Above the January earth In gatherings of mist I’ll find you there, my star of lace Just waiting to be kissed Elizabeth Santos |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Liz, thank you for this and Merry Christmas, Lady Poet  Kathleen (Kay) |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
I very much enjoyed your creative love story. Thanks. Melton |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Oh what a beautiful imagination you have....what a romantic tale! Into my library this goes! Hugs, ~Krista Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
*cringe* I'm sorry....I always do this....I forgot to tuck it away in my library! |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
This is so sweet. Merry Christmas! Deb |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Elizabeth~ This is just the sweetest little marvel my eyes have seen~ Adorable~ Happy Holidays, hon~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Elizabeth this is wonderful. What a beautiful soul you have to write such a wonder. Love, Joyce |
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bestgirl911 Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551Clio, MI , United We Stand |
How absolutely delightful this is....I enjoyed this so much and of course am adding it to my library..... Best |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Elizabeth, you have made a frozen cold subject become toasty warm in love. Thank you for sharing, ME |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Thank you, dear poets of the pub for your warm and kind comments THey are much appreciated Liz |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Dear Elizabeth, This is wonderful. I love a story, and you told this so well. Thank you. Nan |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Liz: I think this is exquisite! What a wonderful imagination you have! Merry Christmas. Betty Lou Hebert |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
Wow, very nice. A sentimental piece  ~Flower lasts so an hour, yet spring will brings her back to life again. |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Mahvelous! Warms a cold winter day it does! |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Liz; I just discovered this magical beauty and fell under it's spell of delightful wonder.... A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I greatly appreciate all of your kind comments to this poem Thank you Liz |
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Mac Attack Member
since 2001-12-12
Posts 100Ontario, Canada |
Wow! Definately worth the read, a beautiful post. |
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