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Faery Fantasy |
SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
~ 1 ~ They prance on leaves and live in trees those faeries of the night They flit along singing their song always out of sight They so delight in taking flight just beyond your view And it makes them smile to see a child who believes they are true ~ 2 ~ Sailing through wave upon wave of luscious green grass it tickles their wings to feel the cool breeze lift them higher into the sky ~ 3 ~ Tumbling limbs waving Giggling they play Soaring through stilled air Serenely they glide Crying for nature's beauty Gracefully they rejoice Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
a colorful and scenic painting you've made for my mind. reminds me of Robin Goodfellow... =) the fourth stanza in part one was really cool too. *clap your hands if you believe* wonderfully written, a unique style. Everyone's got their demons. We all got somethin to atone for. [This message has been edited by Ethan Halo (edited 12-16-2001).] |
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wordancer Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809VA |
I do encourage the belief of fairies, as they do dance just out of our line of vision. Lovely! -wordancer |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Ethan~ Robin Goodfellow is the perfect example of their antics I'm glad that's what comes to mind for you! Thank you for your lovely comments wordancer~ Me too It's just more fun to think of that than it being simply a trick of the eye! Thanks for stopping by! Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Soooo enchanting! I love writing about the Fearies too! It always puts me in that glorious state of a child's wonder.. A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Delightful Faery Tale! I enjoyed this! |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Fun to read and glad other people beieve in fairies too. |
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Bec Member
since 2001-02-23
Posts 475Canberra |
SmittenKitten... Wonderful!! Ethan Halo, I'll clap my hands! So many things happen around us, how could there not be faeries to lend a helping hand? Bec "Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. And all you can do is to go where they can find you." |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
yes I belive in fairies I breathe the dust, the dust is me. |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
ellie LeJeune~ Well I will definitely look for some of your work then! Denise~ Thank you! I'm so happy to hear it Trillium~ I'm glad too Bec~ Exactly! Hey, I love your quote. When I first came to Passions that was the quote I used! Moon Dust~ Good to hear! Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Well Now Krista, You've certainly flown us into the heart of a child with your wonderful poetry about faeries, fantasy and a world of child like joy. I do think that becoming like children once in awhile a good thing. Especially in their innocence of thought as you have expressed here. -Bob |
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Solstice Son Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 469 |
Faeries RULE!!!! I like it !!! Sol " The question shouldn't be...'Why are we here?' but rather 'ARE we here? " |
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Roberta Little Junior Member
since 2001-12-18
Posts 42beloit wi usa |
faeries are cool. maybe you could post a picture of one to go with your poem.i'm sure people would love that. see ya around. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SmittenKitten~ Delighted at finding you here in the Pub .. Happiest Holiday wishes are sent your way~ Enjoyed this adorably cute little piece~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Bob~ Thank you so much for your fabulous reply...I'm so happy to hear that my poem had you "flown into the heart of a child" Sol~ I second that! And thank you for liking this! Roberta~ What a great idea...perhaps I will! Thanks for the suggestion Marge~ Hey you! I'm so happy to see your name here Thank you for the holiday wishes and I send them right back to you! *hugs* Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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