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ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

0 posted 2001-12-15 09:22 AM

The sounds of Summer
silent
as quietly the butterflies
have flown.
Prevailing stillness
of winter
a hush
of Holy choirs
sing
of Silent Grace
and wonder
in the heart
A Song
of everlastiing Love!

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

[This message has been edited by ellie LeJeune (edited 12-15-2001).]

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

1 posted 2001-12-15 09:52 AM

a beautiful poem to read before I attack the shopping mall!

Lovely!

Kathleen (Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

wordancer
Senior Member

since 2000-07-30

Posts 809
VA

2 posted 2001-12-15 03:43 PM

oh so very lovely and hushed, ellie

Just a suggestion

you might want to consider doing away with one of the "silents" in this section below, for the small amount of words that you using, having silent twice in close quarters feels like too much. I do love the quiet simple feel to this one.

The sounds of Summer
Silent
as silently the butterflies

-wordancer

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

3 posted 2001-12-15 08:51 PM

So gentle and soothing as your poetry always is. Joyce

SmittenKitten
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since 2001-06-20

Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

4 posted 2001-12-16 11:35 AM

So softly written, yet the words resonate.
Beautiful!

Hugs,
~Krista

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

5 posted 2001-12-16 12:35 PM

Soft and lovely, Ellie!

Trillium

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since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

6 posted 2001-12-16 05:55 PM

ellie: Very lovely and appropriate for the season.

Betty Lou Hebert

wordancer
Senior Member

since 2000-07-30

Posts 809
VA

7 posted 2001-12-17 01:21 PM

...the dancer trips in, and smiles

bestgirl911
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since 2000-10-04

Posts 551
Clio, MI , United We Stand

8 posted 2001-12-17 09:50 PM

Ellie...

It brought a smile to my face as your words so often do...

Best

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

9 posted 2001-12-19 05:44 PM

Ellie~
What delicately lovely thoughts dance from your pen~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

10 posted 2005-12-13 07:33 PM

Merry Christmas dear sweet friend~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email - [email protected]

Annie78
Member

since 2003-10-03

Posts 469
here then there then back here

11 posted 2005-12-15 12:25 PM

this is so soft and tender....thanks for reminding me of the better things that love brings.
Annie

there is but a short time to exist, love,laugh,live and never stop believing in miracles

Dennis L. White
Senior Member

since 2000-02-17

Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.

12 posted 2005-12-30 08:26 PM

Dear Ellie,
Have you ever noticed how whispered words command attention, the message though subdued is is loud and clear to the strained ear yearning for understanding. Your poem is just that way, sweet, simple truth that whispers wisdom on the wind of beating butterfly wings.

Well done my friend.

Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has passed
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)

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