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Solstice Son
Member

since 2000-09-19

Posts 469

0 posted 2001-12-11 04:24 PM

Old friends, new night
just talking neath a streetlight
smiling often at the sight
of another soul, that fits just right

A joke, a laugh , a gentle sigh
make it hard to say goodbye
but when the moon is long past high
its kind of silly to even try

A gentle walk beneath the stars
the neon lights of closing bars
the smell of pavement neath the feet
of a dear old friend you chance to meet

At the steps, at her door
be nice to have this night once more
and maybe sometime when time is gone
the moonlit night will linger on and on

" The question shouldn't be...'Why are we here?' but rather 'ARE we here? "

Leonard Nimoy

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2001-12-11 09:52 PM

SolsticeSon~

'be nice to have this night once more'

Relishing that thought ... this is lovely~
Very delicately romanticized~
I really enjoyed it~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Solstice Son
Member

since 2000-09-19

Posts 469

2 posted 2001-12-12 03:45 PM

Thanks Marge...romance...nothing like it...save a good bit of chocolate

Sol

" The question shouldn't be...'Why are we here?' but rather 'ARE we here? "

Leonard Nimoy

bestgirl911
Senior Member

since 2000-10-04

Posts 551
Clio, MI , United We Stand

3 posted 2001-12-12 08:33 PM

Sol....

Your right there is nothing in the world like true romance. So hard to find now days...but I am still deep in the trenches..

This shall give me hope...

Best

SmittenKitten
Senior Member

since 2001-06-20

Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

4 posted 2001-12-13 12:44 PM

What a lovely evening you've described with perfect rhyme and flow....with moments like this, you really do want them to last forever. Beautifully written!

Hugs,
~Krista

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

[This message has been edited by SmittenKitten (edited 12-13-2001).]

Solstice Son
Member

since 2000-09-19

Posts 469

5 posted 2001-12-13 01:09 PM

Best girl, thank you and hang in there...or just be romantic anyway..sometimes that's a draw all its own

SmitKit~ thanks for your words~ its more a bit of self indulging daydreaming than anything true to life....but it makes me feel good...nonetheless

Sol

" The question shouldn't be...'Why are we here?' but rather 'ARE we here? "

Leonard Nimoy

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

6 posted 2001-12-13 05:41 PM

A night to remember. Hope you have many of them. Joyce

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

7 posted 2001-12-13 06:54 PM

This is really nice. I could picture the setting and enjoyed the romantic quality.

Betty Lou Hebert

Solstice Son
Member

since 2000-09-19

Posts 469

8 posted 2001-12-14 12:41 PM

Joyce, Trill, thanks...it made me smile...which is always a blessing

Sol

" The question shouldn't be...'Why are we here?' but rather 'ARE we here? "

Leonard Nimoy

Ethan Halo
Senior Member

since 2000-04-28

Posts 793
on the roof again

9 posted 2001-12-15 04:13 AM

wonderful words. you paint my memories so well!
the last two lines... *sigh*
well written. can i keep it?!

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