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Tears with Bare Wings

aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

0 posted 2001-12-05 05:06 PM

Tears drop as I write,
tears of my heart.
Rhyme is but too sound;
Rose lasts but too short.
I try hard to think and hint
and I... I choose to disclose it with my bare wings-
You've touched me in a special way.
Beautiful words are not my style
But if you'll wear that dress,
I'll hold your hands...forever,
be it in wealth or in poor.

~Flower lasts so an hour, yet spring will brings her back to life again.
~Just when I thought it is too far away, opportunity knocks the door

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

1 posted 2001-12-05 06:09 PM

I love the way you write. You have a truly poetic soul. Joyce

Songbird
Member Elite

since 1999-12-15

Posts 2184
Missouri

2 posted 2001-12-07 12:26 PM

Beautiful thoughts.

Solstice Son
Member

since 2000-09-19

Posts 469

3 posted 2001-12-07 10:47 AM

Stark..soulful...excellent...kudos

Sol

" The question shouldn't be...'Why are we here?' but rather 'ARE we here? "

Leonard Nimoy

aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

4 posted 2001-12-07 12:52 PM

thanks. I will write some about women ask the hands of a man or women courting a man, I will just need some time and ideas. LOL

~Flower lasts so an hour, yet spring will brings her back to life again.
~Just when I thought it is too far away, opportunity knocks the door

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