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PhaerieChild
Senior Member

since 1999-08-30

Posts 1787
Aloha, Oregon

0 posted 2001-11-28 09:05 AM

The Gift

I see your love
In every waking moment.
It plays across your smile,
And lights up in your eyes.

I feel your love
In every single touch.
It sparks in the trace of a fingertip,
And explodes in a gentle caress.

I taste your love
In every minute kiss.
It intoxicates like vintage wine,
And brings a sense of peaceful bliss.

I hear your love
In every uttered whisper.
It floats easy on the ear,
And settles softly in the soul.

I smell your love
In the waft of your cologne.
It tells me you are near,
And lets me know that I am truly home

You are love personified.
My senses receive a gentle lift.
My heart beats along with yours,
And my soul rejoices in your gift.
By: PhaerieChild copyright Nov. 28th, 2001
To Mike from Shawna Merry Christmas Love

Tramp Poet
Senior Member

since 2000-01-06

Posts 754
Could Be Anywhere...

1 posted 2001-11-28 11:36 AM

Excellant piece, sis!
Very real and heart-felt
give the big lug a hug from the
Okie side of the family!
Great to see your fingertips here
at PIP again!!
Love n All
D&W

Tramp Poet:
once a scooter tramp
no choice about poet...

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

2 posted 2001-11-28 12:37 PM

what a lovely way to express your feelings for another!

Kathleen (Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

3 posted 2001-11-28 11:41 PM

A beautiful poem of love!

Betty Lou Hebert

PhaerieChild
Senior Member

since 1999-08-30

Posts 1787
Aloha, Oregon

4 posted 2001-11-29 05:19 PM

Thanks all for your kind words. I made a poster of it for my husband. It was supposed to be a Christmas gift but I couldn't wait to give it to him. So he received it last night.

Oh, and Tramp.....He sends a big 'ol sloppy kiss to ya. LOL Love ya Sis.

How can you save me?
When the dark comes right in and takes me,
from my front walk and into bed,
where it kisses my face and eats my head. Shivaree

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

5 posted 2001-12-01 08:56 PM

Love is a beautiful gift! This is lovely, Shawna! So nice to see you again!

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2005-12-13 07:38 PM

Merry Christmas dear sweet friend~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email - [email protected]

Annie78
Member

since 2003-10-03

Posts 469
here then there then back here

7 posted 2005-12-13 09:50 PM

shawna i love this...and am feeling that love personified myself these days. thank you for everything.
Annie

there is but a short time to exist, love,laugh,live and never stop believing in miracles

PhaerieChild
Senior Member

since 1999-08-30

Posts 1787
Aloha, Oregon

8 posted 2005-12-14 04:46 AM

Wow, I wrote this so long ago. The love is still there, stronger than ever. Thanks for the reminder and Merry Christmas!! Annie, I'm prayin' he's a keeper and that he's as good to you as Mike is to me. Love and Hugz and Merry Christmas Sweetie.

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