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I'm here, not really

midnightblues
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 1597
Singapore

0 posted 2005-12-12 11:58 AM

I'm here, not really
you're there, where my heart is
where is yours?

I'm here, not really
heartaches numbed me
no more reminisce

I'm here, not really
feeling lousy
you're gone

I'm here, not really
sooner or later
I'll fade away

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I know it's a lousy poem, inspired by my feeling lousy these few days =( please bear with my nonsense just this once..

Love,
MiCheLLe

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2005-12-12 12:06 PM

SweetOne~
When you write your ... NOTHING is foolish~

Love seeing you here~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email - noles1@totcon.com

Annie78
Member

since 2003-10-03

Posts 469
here then there then back here

2 posted 2005-12-12 12:55 PM

sweetie, we all have lousy days and lousy feelings....i hope that it doesn't last long for you....your writing touches me spiritually, and now i know that i'm not the only one who believes and still has lousy feelings.
Annie

there is but a short time to exist, love,laugh,live and never stop believing in miracles

pictureme2
Member

since 2005-11-13

Posts 194

3 posted 2005-12-12 11:58 PM

midnightblues
lousy was not a word I thought of after reading your poem. I felt your pain and I wanted to reach out and hug you. Its ok to feel lousy because that makes the feeling good days better! Work thru your feelings and what better way than writing!
Write on my friend.
pictureme2

midnightblues
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 1597
Singapore

4 posted 2005-12-14 08:58 AM

Marge, Annie, pictureme:

Thank you for your encouragement & consolation, I feel much better already. You have been really sweet and I feel truly touched

Love
MiCheLLe

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues

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