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ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

0 posted 2001-11-23 08:16 AM

The sea within is at peace.
Gently do the waves caress,
this tranquil shore serene.

For the sunrises a new dawn.
Yesterday but a memory,
it's cares cast upon the deep.

Tomorrows sunrise a mystery.

The glory of this one morn,
is shimmering gift of gold.

Grace casts her Love-light
on warm winds of Hope.

The Horizon is aflame
with Loves passionate wonders,
that fill the soul anew
with everlasting gentle waves
of Loves Eternal Light.

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

1 posted 2001-11-23 09:08 AM

Ellie, yes, yes, "yesterday but a memory"
how perfectly beautiful (wish there were a better word than that!!!)
How soft...a new beginning felt in every line. Boy, this is nice to read first thing in the morning.

Kathleen

Songbird
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since 1999-12-15

Posts 2184
Missouri

2 posted 2001-11-23 12:12 PM

You did an outstanding job on this one. I really enjoyed it. I think a one word description of your poetry would be serenity.

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

3 posted 2001-11-24 08:53 AM

Very beautiful, Ellie! But of course!

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

4 posted 2001-11-24 03:26 PM

Lovely. And you're right. All we have is the moment and the anticiption of tomorrow. Joyce

Trillium

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since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

5 posted 2001-11-24 11:09 PM

Wonderful! I've seen sunrises that made me feel just this way!

Betty Lou Hebert

2dalimit
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since 2000-02-08

Posts 2228
Mississippi coast

6 posted 2001-11-25 01:47 PM

Thanks for bringing this image to mind. Your sunrise picture soothes the troubled soul.

Melton

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

7 posted 2001-11-26 08:47 AM

Wonderfully written, Ellie. I just loved this one!

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Allan Riverwood

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since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

8 posted 2001-11-26 09:23 AM

This was very interesting. It sounded almost like a chant, or a prophecy or something.
The feel you created in this is very unique, but very good. I can't quite put my finger on it...
Regardless, I enjoyed this piece very much.
~Allan

"I know it's nice to be known - It caresses your ego - but the society cost is terrible."
~Vangelis

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