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Dennis L. White
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0 posted 2001-11-11 09:11 AM



long, the shadows cast
sun falls to earth untethered
scorching horizon


autumn sunset blaze
through the barren shadeless trees
embers slowly die


day surrenders light
besieged by nocturnal realm
chill engulfs the void


© Copyright 2001 Dennis L. White - All Rights Reserved
Irish Rose
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1 posted 2001-11-11 05:06 PM


This speaks to me of the season and all that goes with it, I hate snow, love leaves and could stay this way for a long time!

Kathleen
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also wrote as The Lady of Shallot
"be true to yourself"

ellie LeJeune
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2 posted 2001-11-11 06:57 PM


Again, these are sooo wondrous!Dennis. Loved your haiku response...crazy,but no frost here yet. First time ever I might have my garden for Thanksgiving...wow! P.U.Y.M.B. Sis

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

Honeybee
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3 posted 2001-11-11 09:26 PM



I really like these, Dennis.  You are the haiku master  

Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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4 posted 2001-11-12 12:13 PM


These are so descriptive!  Good job!

Betty Lou Hebert

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5 posted 2001-11-16 09:02 AM


Dennis~
How very, very lovely your verse falls to appreciative eyes~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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6 posted 2001-11-20 07:37 PM


just lovely *s
Marge Tindal
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7 posted 2005-12-13 07:41 PM



Merry Christmas dear sweet friend~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

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