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mistyrose Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 75state of anxiety |
are you ready to open your arms to me are you waiting for me at all if i stop hiding will you then come seek me will you trust and believe me for no reason at all when i stop going the wrong direction will you be there to guide me walk along beside me are you ready to open your life for me----chances are we will both be happy love is where you've brought me are you ready... |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Interesting poem. It is sad that our own timidity can deprive us of the best things inlife, at times. Joyce |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MistyRose~ A cute and flirtatious piece. I enjoyed the idea of hide and seek. 'will you trust and believe me for no reason at all' Great map for love to follow ~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
at first I thought it was about god by the first stanza, but then I realize it was about a emotion potrayed as a living being. Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.) |
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Red_Feather Member
since 2001-01-19
Posts 131The Vagabond Sea |
I like this, it really let me feel the wierd static of uncertain emotions between people. One's not half two it's two are halves of one EE Cummings |
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