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Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

0 posted 2006-07-28 09:36 PM

Luna's Dawn

Cascading falls of blue adorn
Seep trough the crags of early morn
To touch the stymied sleepy eye
Of Luna’s mask on rising sky
Entangled with the sun’s estate
Where stars discuss their certain fate
To vanish in the coming stance
And meditate on dusk’s romance
Where night owl calls to praise the name
And shadow crawls to do the same
Of goddess on her silver stream
Who casts her spell on dreamer’s dreams
Through flowing robes of sequined beams
That tumble down with such extreme
That lover’s hearts as one do beat
And shimmer through the moon’s retreat
Behind a mountain by the sea
Or in the minds of you and me
As pallid light of Love withdrawn
Until the time of Luna’s dawn.

Lighthouse Bob

midnightblues
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since 2000-07-01

Posts 1597
Singapore

1 posted 2006-07-28 11:59 PM

Every word that you use is poetry on its own.. I really like this dreamy piece!

Love,
MiCheLLe

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

2 posted 2006-07-29 12:25 PM

you have outdone yourself with this romantic piece. Love, Joyce

Jess
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since 2006-06-06

Posts 243
Washington

3 posted 2006-07-29 01:30 AM

This is absolutely beautiful. Every word. I havent posted anything for a long time but I read this poem and knew that I had to say something; had to convey how lovely and dreamy and exquisite I think it is

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

4 posted 2006-07-30 03:20 PM

Dear Bob: This is a masterpiece of poetry!

Betty Lou

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Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

5 posted 2006-07-30 11:46 PM

Oh my!

pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27

Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa

6 posted 2006-07-31 07:46 AM

great piece Bob! bravo!

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

divine chaos
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since 2006-07-09

Posts 617
dancing 'neath the moon

7 posted 2006-07-31 02:55 PM

this absolutely stunning
wonderful wonderful piece

~*Sheli*~

By words the mind is winged
~Aristophanes~

Munda
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since 1999-10-08

Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands

8 posted 2006-07-31 03:04 PM

This is supurb! Thanks for the pleasure of reading this poem.

Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

9 posted 2006-08-01 11:25 AM

Thank you everyone for your kind and encouraging words.

MiCheLLe,

I am happy and really a bit surprised that every word became as poetry to you. Every word? Really? That's a beautiful compliment. Thank you.

Joyce,

Moi???? Romantic??? Smiles. I guess we all have our moments.... Again, thank you for your loving encouragement and your kind words.

Jess,

I was especially glad to see that you read my poem because I know how very very much you love Greek Mythology and thank you for your most exuberent response. I appreciate it very much.

Betty Lou,

Your response was short and most sweet as I do know from whose lips has come--"Masterpiece!" Tahnk you so very very much.

Mysteria,

I'm so glad that you came by
with your vibrant most, "Oh My!"

You gave me Big Smiles.

Thank you.

Pegasus,

It's always a pleasure for me to hear from a man with a kindred spirit. Thank you (thank you) always for your kind words.

Sheli,

Thank you. Your praise really touched me. It truly stirred my heart to hear such wonderful encouraging words. Thank you.

Munda,

Thank you for your kind words.... Really, Really, Really, The Pleausre Was All Mine.

Again, Thank You Everyone!!!

-Bob

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