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Trillium
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0 posted 2006-06-18 07:26 PM


Village Picnic

When July came, we'd always go
To the village picnic so
We could eat the tasty fare
Local women served up there.
The hams and roasts, the chicken, fried,
The salads, pickles, set with pride
Upon long tables, lemonade,
And every kind of cake was made,
As well as many luscious pies!

The air would ring with lusty cries,
As a baseball game was played,
For every home run that was made.
We'd have a sing-a-long before
We all headed home once more.
Up in the wagon bed I'd lie
And watch the night hawks cross the sky,
Until it grew too dark to see.
I'd listen to the repartee
Between the grown ups and smile,
Enjoying every country mile!


Betty Lou Hebert


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1 posted 2006-06-18 07:35 PM


And oh what fun it was.  This brought back good memories.  Love, joyce
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2 posted 2006-06-19 07:54 PM


i could picture everything in my mind!  well done.  
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3 posted 2006-06-19 09:56 PM


Nice flow ri8ding along.
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4 posted 2006-06-20 05:27 AM


I really like this bit of nostalgia. nice work.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



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5 posted 2006-06-20 10:24 PM


Dear Joyce;  The best part of all was getting free ice cream cones!!

Love
Betty Lou

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6 posted 2006-06-20 10:25 PM


bekah:  Thanks for commenting and glad to hear you could picture what was happening.

Betty Lou

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7 posted 2006-06-20 10:25 PM


Frank:  Thank you for commenting!

Betty Lou

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8 posted 2006-06-20 10:26 PM


pegasus111:  Always good to hear from you!
Thanks!

Betty Lou

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9 posted 2006-06-20 11:27 PM


Dear Betty,

Your poetry tells of a quaint little country story with gingham picnic mats and a gleeful atmosphere. It truly touched my heart!

Love,
MiCheLLe

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10 posted 2006-06-21 12:49 PM


BettyLou~
Okay lady ... fork over a double-dipped strawberry cone ... RIGHT NOW !

You spin a great nostalgic yarn~
*Huglets*

~HI MY RONNIE~
~*Marge*~

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11 posted 2006-06-21 09:50 PM


MiCheLLe:  Thanks!  I went back a long ways for this one!

Love
Betty Lou

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12 posted 2006-06-21 09:52 PM


Dear Marge:  Sorry, they only have vanilla, but it is GOOD!  Homemade!

RON SAYS HI BACK!

Love
Betty Lou

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13 posted 2006-06-22 10:17 AM


Trillium,

Your poem was like looking back through a photo album full of most delightful memorabilia.

Wonderful imagery, though, it made me a bit hungry.

Smiles. I enjoyed reading your poem very much.

-Bob

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14 posted 2006-06-23 11:11 PM


Thank you Bob!  Glad you enjoyed the poem!

Betty Lou

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15 posted 2006-06-24 08:23 AM


Dear Betty Lou

You know I'm always hungry when you talk about food.......Eh! Eh!

That country mile did it for me!!!  I love the country as you know.

A wonderful read!!!

Love Verbena xo


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16 posted 2006-06-24 03:38 PM


Dear Verbena:  Maybe the food wasn't as wonderful as I remember it, but those country women were good cooks! Thanks!

Love
Betty Lou

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