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Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17

Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.

0 posted 2006-05-13 10:16 PM

green buds
attract the robin~
an empty feeder

Joyce Johnson

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since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

1 posted 2006-05-18 11:14 AM

Nice Dennis. I am not acquainted with this version of the haiku. I've only seen the five, seven, five examples. Joyce

Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17

Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.

2 posted 2006-05-20 04:35 PM

Hi Joyce, This is more contemporary Haiku. Rule of thumb is 5-7-5 syllables or less to convey the word picture. Thanks for your comment. Dennis :^)

picturegramic
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since 2006-05-16

Posts 112

3 posted 2006-05-22 12:39 PM

I also thought it had to be 5-7-5 but
you did paint the picture

I like to write in haiku because I find I don't have much time and that keeps me writing. thanks for sharing,

picturegramic :)

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2006-05-23 09:46 AM

Dennis~
This is truly a beaut~

Thank you for showing up and sharing~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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picturegramic
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since 2006-05-16

Posts 112

5 posted 2006-05-23 10:16 PM

Enjoyable haiku

I enjoy the style and enjoyed yours.
thanks for sharing,

picturegramic :)

skyshine

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since 2002-02-07

Posts 3058
Beneath the northern stars

6 posted 2006-05-27 01:59 PM

Lovely picture....

~sky

I hope someday you get the chance to live like you were dying....
~Tim McGraw

Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

7 posted 2006-06-01 04:03 PM

Dennis,

Empty-nest syndrome or should I say "feeder" can certainly have its effects on our observing them.... Sigh. But, don't fret, my friend, they'll be Home when the food runs low. Smiles.

-Bob

kitkat
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since 2000-01-11

Posts 878
Nova Scotia

8 posted 2006-07-12 09:49 AM

Nicely done. I always have enjoyed haiku as it describes so much with so little

kitkat

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Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

9 posted 2006-07-12 03:01 PM

Nice work Dennis!

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