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longte Member
since 2005-04-06
Posts 199Australia |
Windy forest at night Evening darkly overcast, hungry urgent breeze Silence, never silent, anger seeking some release Shades of black, charcoal wraiths, playing in the trees Choked the horror, of the touch, of the swirling leaves Diana finds a hole in clouds, sending out her beams Blacker still the blackest spots, evil living dreams Autumn trees skeletal, gargoyles in a mausoleum Arrogant their movements, nothing as it seems Light; blessed light; safety in the tainted light Still unwoven tapestry; changes in your sight Ghost battalions moving, flicker left and right Brave retreat impossible, terrors sweet delight Tree is just a tree; there is no need for fear Hounds of Hell are hunting; taste the bitter air So soft the gentle touch, leaf into your hair Rabid Vampire smiles; to fade and disappear Shadows so extended; liquid dancing wraiths Fools walk in darkness; someone always pays Rare beauty in the daylight, now no trace remains Ghosts and superstition, haunting forest glades .. . Live It |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Mysterious and gothic, I like it! Love, MiCheLLe If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues |
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Trillium 
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
longte: I never looked at walking in a night time forest this way! Very descriptive! Trillium Betty Lou Hebert |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Vivid and imaginative. I will never walk in the woods at night. Good work. Joyce |
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picturegramic Member
since 2006-05-16
Posts 112 |
was kind of a ghostly dark walk. thanks very descriptive and painted black vividly! thanks for sharing, picturegramic :) |
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longte Member
since 2005-04-06
Posts 199Australia |
All we see is not all there is It is easy to say brave words in sunshine Evening gives a totally different perspective. .. . |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Very spooky.....vivid descriptions of nighttime fears. ~sky I hope someday you get the chance to live like you were dying.... |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Very descriptive writing here and, yes, I so remember walking alone at night in a dark dark forest and I do recall that my imagination did get away with me.... Ouch. I guess, as my pen name suggests, I do prefer to stay, whenever posible, in the light. Smiles. Very well written. -Bob |
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kif kif Member
since 2006-06-01
Posts 439BCN |
Hello. Fantastic write. I enjoyed the spooky rhythm, beholding a creepy atmosphere. "Autumn trees...arrogant their movements" is beautifully descriptive. Also, cool reference to Diana. |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
I enjoyed this and yes things go bump in the night... Off the subject but puts me in mind of a young friend my husband and I were driving home one dark night. When we came to his street he said, "turn here, in the daytime there is a tree there " best to you, martyjo |
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