untitled.. actually I couldn't come up with one

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midnightblues
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 1597
Singapore

0 posted 2006-04-24 10:42 AM

The earthly issues beckon
Cloaked in the Devil's deceit
I've fallen once too many
Into the trap of guilt and sins

You will heal me
And send me a rainbow after this storm
In the midst of my darkest fears
All my bitter tears
I've learnt to come and rest in You

I feel Your spirit in the wind
Your love has washed away my sins
Touched by Your sacrifice
I believe that I'll survive

Jesus I know you are God
Draw me closer to You everyday
In You I will triumph
For You I will live
To Your Kingdom I belong
------------------------
God is good all the time!

Love,
MiCheLLe

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

1 posted 2006-04-24 11:19 AM

Very nice, Michelle. Worthy of a name. Love, Joyce

midnightblues
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 1597
Singapore

2 posted 2006-04-24 11:30 AM

Thank you Joyce

Love,
MiCheLLe

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2006-04-24 07:00 PM

Michelle~
Such a moving write ... and I can only suggest a piece of a line from your beautifully prayerful piece as the title -

Draw Me Closer

I adore this beauty~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

4 posted 2006-04-25 07:58 PM

MiCheLle: I love this poem! Beautiful! The title that comes to me is "Send Me a Rainbow!

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

SPIRIT
Senior Member

since 2002-12-29

Posts 1745
California Desert

5 posted 2006-04-25 10:24 PM

This is a beauty, but until it is titled it is unfinished. The first suggestion you got was super, I feel that it needs a 'God' title.
Saving Grace, My Redeemer you really have a lot of options...hope you find one soon to your liking.

Dinah

SPIRIT
Senior Member

since 2002-12-29

Posts 1745
California Desert

6 posted 2006-04-25 10:25 PM

This is a beauty, but until it is titled it is unfinished. The first suggestion you got was super, I feel that it needs a 'God' title.
Saving Grace, My Redeemer you really have a lot of options...hope you find one soon to your liking.

Dinah

pegasus111
Member Elite

since 2000-07-27

Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa

7 posted 2006-04-27 07:43 AM

your faith will guide you to a title. nicely done

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

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