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Brenda Hall
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0 posted 2006-04-10 02:59 PM


To give you a better life, Jesus died
In dark times, never leaves your side
He truly knows what you think and say
At your work, with family, or at play

God wants your heart and your soul
Honoring and loving him is his goal
Just ask God to come into your life
Forgive your sins, comfort your strife

You can't put God in layaway at a store
Life's better if your heart's an open door
God does not accept credit cards at all

Read the Bible, live righteouly and pray
Thank God for his blessings every day
A Personal Relationship will never part
This is the way to give God you heart

By: Brenda Hall
"thepassionatepoet"

© Copyright 2006 Brenda Hall - All Rights Reserved
midnightblues
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1 posted 2006-04-11 12:07 PM


OK!

Love,
MiCheLLe

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues

skyshine
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2 posted 2006-04-12 12:05 PM


Yes, it is the way!

~sky

I hope someday you get the chance to live like you were dying....
~Tim McGraw

thebop
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3 posted 2007-03-18 07:17 AM


To all who read my poem, Give God Your Heart:

I left out the 4th line of the 3rd verse, which is to be read as follows:

He patiently awaits one heartfelt call

I apologize for the mistake. I hope you will forgive me. Please re-read the poem and it may make a little better sense. Thank you!

Brenda Hall


Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2007-03-18 09:45 AM


Brenda~

'He patiently awaits one heartfelt call'

He is patient ... and is always there when we call ... that's for sure ~
A lovely write~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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