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The Windsor Witch |
Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
The Windsor Witch A ship is anchored in the bay. I watched it move to tidal sway. I was surprised to see it there. The moon last night was big and fair And threw a path of silver sheen Where now this sailing ship is seen. Her sails are furled, though gray and old. Her figurehead looks pale and cold. I hail the bridge; there's no reply. I go on board to see if I Can find a clue to her intent, About her crew and where they went. The deck needs varnish, though I see Her lines are all coiled Flemishly. The hold smells musty; there's no gear To show that sailors bunked down here. No food on board.The water kegs Are down to brackish smelling dregs. The captain's cabin yields no trace Of the ship's log.The empty space Breathes mystery and something more That makes me hurry out the door! There is an atmosphere of dread And many notions fill my head! But none seem plausible to me, So I will have to wait and see What is revealed.What comes to light. It's eerie when I wake at night To see her moving on each swell. I think sometimes I hear her bell Ring out the hours, but I know That this, of course, just isn't so. Nobody knows from whence she came. Nor have they ever heard her name. The Windsor Witch is on her stern. Her port of call, we've yet to learn. The people from the city pier Are going to move her out of here. Her long boat's gone and so they say The crew did surely row away. Where did they go, abandoning Their ship? It must have been something Quite dire to induce the need To disappear with stealth and speed. Perhaps we'll never know at all! I wonder what fate will be-fall This Windsor Witch and will she sail Once more through wind and fearsome gale? Betty Lou Hebert |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Hi Betty, SOunds like it's gonna be an awesome adventure! I adore stories like this Love, MiCheLLe If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Betty I envy you your stock of stories. This is wonderful. Love, Joyce |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BettyLou~ I adore the all of this poetic tale~ Now I'm on a search for information on The Windsor Witch !!! You've written a tale of intrigue~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Trillium This was so well done and a great story of intrigue. Now I'm curious too! |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Thank you MiCheLle! I always enjoy hearing from you and glad you liked the poem. Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Joyce: A lot of what I write is sheer imagination! This is one of them. Thanks. Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: Let me know if you find anything about the Windsor Witch! It will be a miracle, because I made the whole thing up! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Martie: Thank you for your comments. It was a fun write, but not based on any actual events. Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
a very clever write ( as usual ). Your range is something to be envied. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BettyLou~ You sent me on a merry chase ! BUT ... as usual I learned some interesting facts ! Found a US Commissioned Ship called the Waterwitch ... http://www.portcolumbus.org/wwpics.htm ... very interesting reading~ AND ... I also wrote to Antiqubook.com and received the following in response to my inquiry~ quote: NOW ... I thank you kindly my lady ... for each day that I learn something new is a great day to me !!! *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh my gosh!! At first I thought this may be about moi! ROTFL!! First of all... I live in a city called Windsor. And my hubby is a professional wizard/magician.. that makes me a witch, right? When I stopped laughing and read this I understood more. And what a great write it is!! Thank you Marge for the further information as well. Hugs to you Betty Lou! |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
pegasus: Thank you kind sir!! Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: Thanks for sharing all that you learned and it is interesting reading for sure! I appreciate all the effort you went to! Let me know if you find anything else. Thanks again. Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Enchantress: What a coincidence and I had to laugh too! What a natural mistake to make, considering the title. Glad you liked it. Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Debo Member
since 2006-04-18
Posts 321Texas U.S.A. |
What a freat haunting little write. I loved it I truely did... Debo |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Debo: I'm glad you enjoyed this poem. Thanks for commenting on it too! Trillium Betty Lou Hebert |
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Verbena Member
since 2005-10-17
Posts 196Australia |
Dear Betty Lou You had me on a Windsor Witch - Hunt and then I found out it did not exist! Still, I enjoyed your versing! Love Verbena xo |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Verbena: Well maybe it did exist somewhere in time!! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BettyLou~ 'somewhere in time' Yep ... I can 'almost' guarantee it~ Poetic thoughts sail an endless sea in search of the ink to let them be A poem that causes others to think You did that here ... YEP ! that's what I think ! Write on dear poetess~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: I enjoyed your little poem! Let's pretend the Windsor Witch did sail and left behind a mystery! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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