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0 posted 2006-03-05 04:18 PM





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A wrecked heart,

Is nothing but a misplaced soul,

Grief-stricken by its new self,

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Unfamiliar with the effect-

When it spreads itself too lean,

Letting someone drag it from here to there,

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Will it ever discover to assent to?

Becoming whole again,

One with itself, not rummaging like a pest.

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I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

© Copyright 2006 Ronil B Tataria - All Rights Reserved
Klassy Lassy
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1 posted 2006-03-07 09:47 PM


Someone told me recently that when I am whole within myself then I will be able to find my other half.  Your poem makes me think of this and the rough edges and bruises we get rummaging along the way.  Thank God for friends who fill the void in the mean time.  And we get to keep them, too!  

This touches deeply.

~Klassy~  

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