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Walking Back |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores ![]() |
Walking Back ~*Marge Tindal*~ Walking back to where I've been streets of loving you again Can't get past the memory that keeps coming back to me You're a love I can't forget leaving me with no regret Walking through old times of you not believing that we're through Hoping that it doesn't show I've got a long way to go Just one turn away from you should not be so hard to do In the end I guess you knew I'd come walking back to you ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
I hear you, Marge....why is love so complicated? Oh, well!!! A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ellie~ PERFECT question .... AND, I've got an answer .... Cause it writes a LOT of poetry ! ! ! ![]() Tee-Hee-Hee ! Couldn't resist ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Nice reading your poetry. BTW: Is this the sonnet form? Melton |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Some old flames never quite get extinquished, do they, Marge? Great poem! |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Melton~ Thank you always for the read and reply~ *Shucks, I don't know ... I just write 'em ~ I don't set out to purposely pen in any strict poetic form ... UNLESS, I'm in Nan's Poetry Workshop~ And she cracks a mean poetic whip ! ! ![]() I usually just let the words drop to the page~ Works for me~ ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denise~ Well ... seems we were doing the dueling pen thang~ ![]() Touche~ LOL ! Thanks, gal~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Trillium![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Marge: I suppose most of us have "walked" this road at least once in our life. I really liked the poem. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Joyce Johnson![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Hope this is a short walk Marge. This lovely. Joyce |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Love it. It's so true. Why are some loves so much harder to get over than others? But you are absolutely right about it making great fodder for poetry. The one I never completely got over has been inspiring me to write for longer now than I care to remember. (because if I tell you how long, I'd be embarrassed!!!!) Really enjoyed this Tracey If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BettyLou~ LOL ! I hear it's a well-worn path ! ![]() Thanks hon~ Joyce~ *smiles* Just one of my little singing muses taking a stroll through the ink~ ![]() Tracey~ Thanks for the read~ Shucks ... me and Methuselah have memories we share ! ! ![]() *Hugs* to all~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 09-01-2001).] |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- Oh, yes...I've walked this street a time or two...or twenty...LOL! Liking this lots, I am.. ![]() Now...I think I'll go for a walk.. ![]() Hugs, ![]() ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 09-01-2001).] |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vicky~ You are so loving and kind~ Thank you for taking the time to be my friend~ Love you~ ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Ok, ok, if you're going to make me search for you, I'll just have to find all your posting places... enjoyed! |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DecaDoodle~ LOL @ you ! ! You know how them little Injuns are - always ducking behind the nearest tree ~ And you ought to be dipping in and out of all these forums anyhooos ! ! ![]() Tee-Hee-Hee ! Seek and ye shall find ! ![]() ~*Me*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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bestgirl911 Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551Clio, MI , United We Stand |
Marge... This is truly delightful. I think everyone has felt this way. There is always the one you can never get out of your heart...the one you always come back for.....You expressed this beautifully. Ranea [This message has been edited by bestgirl911 (edited 09-04-2001).] |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BestGirl~ Thank you so much for the reply. And some just keep walking in the same familiar circles~ ![]() *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I'm considering a walk backwards in time as I write this, and though there never was anything tangible in the past, maybe only in my imagination, an opportunity may soon present itself to ignite an old spark of interest. Time will tell. Maybe a golden opportunity to pen a new poem at least. |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MidniteSun~ One thing about those golden opportunities ~ they can glitter ~ Go for it, gal~ Thanks for the read and reply~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sometimes the *why* of the *sigh* can be found on a dusty poetic corner~ ![]() ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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FNG Member
since 2006-02-07
Posts 477 |
Hi Marge, You have said it all for me... ![]() I love this poem. ![]() |
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desert-spike Member
since 2006-02-01
Posts 194TX/USA |
We should all just have ourselves cloned, under the itention of decomplicating love. Wonderful write Marge. Once more, you've hit the nail on the head, in a tremendously romantic way. ![]() |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Hi Marge, This is so very different from your usual works, and I love it just as much! Lovely read ![]() Love, MiCheLLe If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Great write. Thought I'd give it a boost up the ladder,just because. martyjo |
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Verbena Member
since 2005-10-17
Posts 196Australia |
Dear Marge 'This Road' is well travelled and I love your sense of humour about why is love so complicated......."Cause it writes a LOT of poetry!" I liked this poem of yours! Love Verbena xo |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
When I 'boosted' this one to the Daily Topic pages for someone to read ... I didn't expect these wonderful replies to be added ... THANK YOU ALL~ *Huglets* ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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